Henrietta Heron

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  • 06-14-2004, 01:31 PM
    Lava Lamp
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    Henrietta Heron
    This Great Blue Heron has been hanging around so much my children have named her Henrietta. What do you think of the photo? How would you improve it?
  • 06-14-2004, 02:47 PM
    Smitty001
    Wow! That's a cool pic...oh, wait, a CRITIQUE! Suppose I should be more specific than "Cool!", huh? :o) I love the color -- it jumps right out at you. And I don't want to know how many frames it took before you actually got the bird's head composed like that in the frame. It would take me plenty of tries. :o)
  • 06-14-2004, 03:15 PM
    skyline315
    I like the picture quite a bit. my only problem is that without any of the body included i feel like his head and upper body are just kind of floating out in space. as if there's nothing anchoring it down.

    just a personal taste thing, i think.
  • 06-14-2004, 03:18 PM
    Elysian
    Beautiful bird, but that doesn't of course automatcially mean that it's a beautiful shot.
    I think the odd crop is an attempt to correct distracting elements (correct me if I'm wrong) and that bothers me. The result doesn't work for me though if I have to be honest.
    The image is too blurry, I don't like that either. I also don't consider the composition very strong.
    The colors are nice, I don't think the leafs are too distracting, not every shot has to be "hyper clean".

    Thanks for sharing.
  • 06-14-2004, 05:53 PM
    Lava Lamp
    Thank you all for your comments. JoeD, I hope you'll post some of your own work -- I don't think I've seen any of your photos yet.