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Thread: The Heavens

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    The Heavens

    I took this photo at rigi kulm, Switzerland. Your comments are welcome...
    Thanks,
    Pavan
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    Re: The Heavens

    Wecome to our forum! I could not help to notice this is your first post here.

    Quite a dreamy scene you've got here. I think there is a little bit of room for improvement, in particular I would crop most of the sky out as it is a bit boring. The pic would then turn into a landscape format which will add to the overall quietness of the scene. I would also increase a little bit the saturation and bring the yellowish-ness of the grass. Finally, I would rotate the pic slightly. I have the feeling that the horizon is not ... well... horizontal....

    Hope you will keep on visiting this site often and post your pics here. I am looking forward to more of your work. Would you also mind letting us know the type of camera and gear you are using? I am curious about the type of film you are using.

    Cheers,

    Steph.

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    Re: The Heavens

    Pavan,

    I actually took the liberty to post a version of your pic with some of the modifications I mentioned earlier. I hope you do not mind. If you do, please let me know. I won't do it again!

    Cheers,

    Steph.
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