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Thread: Headshot!

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    Headshot!

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    I need to know IF this works, even though I cut off the rider... It is supposed to be a shot of the horse... but I am bothered by the headless person what do you think?
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    Re: Headshot!

    Ahhh, yes! The Headless Horsewoman.
    Generally a no-no. Looks like the horse was presenting you with a great opportunity. I'm a little bothered by the lack of focus on his eye, and it may be because he might have moved his head at that time.
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    Re: Headshot!

    More like this... ?.... He is a bit hard to shoot with one side being "Prettier" than the other!...lol.... I guess that is what those of you with models go through!
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    " In Germany they first came for the communists, and I didn't speak up because I wasn't a communist. Then they came for the Jews, and I didn't speak up because I wasn't a Jew. Then They came for the trade unionists, and I didn't speak up because I wasn't a trade unionists. Then they came for the Catholics and I didn't speak up because I was a Protestant. Then they came after me- and by that time NO ONE WAS LEFT TO SPEAK UP."
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    Re: Headshot!

    The headless rider is a major problem to me.
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    Re: Headshot!

    Perhaps a tighter crop on the photo so you see less of the woman and she just becomes background noise

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