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I am no better than you. I critique to teach myself to see.
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Feel free to edit my photos or do anything else that will help me learn.
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Sony/Minolta - way more gear than talent.
Wow, yes, this works very well! Your other shots are quite good, don't get me wrong, but I feel this is more of a portrait of the humming bird. It seems more detailed, sharper and more incisive than the color shots.
You should be very proud of this shot. This should be submitted to some publication for sure.
What if I cropped the top some to lessen some of the space in the top center. I would clone the flower so that it is not cut off.
Also here is another B&W portrait.
Terry
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I am no better than you. I critique to teach myself to see.
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Feel free to edit my photos or do anything else that will help me learn.
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Sony/Minolta - way more gear than talent.
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I am no better than you. I critique to teach myself to see.
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Feel free to edit my photos or do anything else that will help me learn.
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Sony/Minolta - way more gear than talent.