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  1. 08-25-2008, 02:25 PM #1
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    Have to start someplace, 3...

    #3 - Bird Looking the Wrong Way

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    Re: Have to start someplace, 3...

    Your focal point seems to be on the branch rather than the bird. A tighter crop might help.
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    Re: Have to start someplace, 3...

    Quote Originally Posted by Frog
    Your focal point seems to be on the branch rather than the bird. A tighter crop might help.
    Bird Looking Cropped More

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