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    Harmony Hope

    My daughter HH, posing for her birthday portrait in the playhouse. Suggestions, comments if you please?
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    Re: Harmony Hope

    Aw...what a cutie! This is a really sweet picture too.
    My only nit would be that the doors/shutters are a bit bright for my liking...but aside from that, I really like it.

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    Re: Harmony Hope

    Here is the image without any contrast or brightness bumps. Do you find the contrast between the house and the background to too heavy in the first image or does this one have the same problem?
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    Re: Harmony Hope

    Hmm...well, I do like the framing around her a little less bright, but when you take away the contrast...you lose a little something with her. I'm not much help, am I?? Lol...

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    Re: Harmony Hope

    Nice photo

    I think what you need to do is select the face and body, and then adjust the contrast for just the face which will make your daughter pop a bit more.
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    Re: Harmony Hope

    Or how about reverting to the colour? I think it would solve the problems.
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    Re: Harmony Hope

    Quote Originally Posted by Overbeyond
    Or how about reverting to the colour? I think it would solve the problems.
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    Yeah! Can we see the color version if there is one?

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    Re: Harmony Hope

    For your consideration, in color.
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    Re: Harmony Hope

    Oh, I love the color one. Her eyes are beautiful, and I love the red of her shirt against the off-white of the house. If you just crop it like the b&w one is, I think that one is my favorite version.

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    Re: Harmony Hope

    With the same crop. Thanks for your advice everyone!
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    Re: Harmony Hope

    Its a lovely photo but I prefer the B&W. I hope you don't mind but I saved it to see if the extra contrast on the head and body would work, and it does make the B&W stand out even more than the colour.

    Give it a try,

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    Re: Harmony Hope

    I love this shot.

    The expression on your daughter's face is amazing. She seems so mature in her early age!! So poised & serious! and very strong.

    The pic as a whole is very well framed too.

    Good shooting.
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