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Thread: Harbor Freeway

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    Harbor Freeway

    This was not an easy shot to get. I was by myself in downtown, on a highly visible freeway overpass that forbade pedestrian access. So not much time to really get it perfect.

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    Re: Harbor Freeway

    Very nice Doc, Your L.A. landscapes are always very good. I wouldn't change a thing.
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    Re: Harbor Freeway

    Very dynamic. The blue sky is a plus.
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    Re: Harbor Freeway

    Thanks for the comments. :thumbsup:
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    Re: Harbor Freeway

    Very nicely done. The blue skies is definitely a plus. Very dynamic image and love the perspective here. Also the skyscape in the background only add to this. nicely done.
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    Re: Harbor Freeway

    It's a great image. You did well if you didn't have much time.
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    Re: Harbor Freeway

    The whole thing looks slightly tilted to the left and I am bummed by the 2 poles/trees on the left blocking the even flow of the headlights.

    Still, it is a great location and well worth many (abet short) return visits.
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    Re: Harbor Freeway

    Agree about the two poles/trees. I find them distracting.

    Also agree that it looks tilted, but I think that the effect works well in this case. It actually adds something, in my opinion.

    Nice image, Dr. I really dig your urban landscape work in general and this shot is no exception.

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    Re: Harbor Freeway

    I am going to disagree about the poles/trees.

    I think they give it a realistic feeling. Something that tells us about the photographers perspective. I think removing them the shot would lose some of the character and also they add a sort of illusion of greater depth/distance than there actually is between him and the bridge.

    Love the blue skies.

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    Re: Harbor Freeway

    I see what you're saying, Luke. Taking them out would drastically change the feel of the image. I'm still not sure about them, though.

    Also, forgot to add that I love the sky/stars/clouds, as well.

    What were the settings for this shot?

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    Re: Harbor Freeway

    I'll have to look again at the tilt. I did straighten it in post, but it looks like the building I used isn't vertically centered.

    MB: When I got home I used Google Earth to see if any of the other overpasses around there were better, and I think I found one or two. Definitely going for a return visit.

    Draymorton: Thanks a lot for the nice comments. This was a 25-sec exposure, at f/11 I think. Something like that. EXIF may still be embedded in the pic.
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    Re: Harbor Freeway

    Quote Originally Posted by DrRoebuck
    ...MB: When I got home I used Google Earth to see if any of the other overpasses around there were better, and I think I found one or two. Definitely going for a return visit......
    When I got home I looked at this on my MAC and it looks a whole lot better than it did on my crummy PC at work so I like it even more than I did when I posted earlier.

    But now that I think about it this would sure look better shot in Europe.

    Or Florida! :thumbsup:
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    Re: Harbor Freeway

    Quote Originally Posted by MB1
    When I got home I looked at this on my MAC and it looks a whole lot better than it did on my crummy PC at work so I like it even more than I did when I posted earlier.

    But now that I think about it this would sure look better shot in Europe.

    Or Florida! :thumbsup:
    Do they have freeways in Florida?
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    Re: Harbor Freeway

    Thats an excellent shot in my book. The sky complements the freeway lights very well!

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    Re: Harbor Freeway

    Quote Originally Posted by chaman
    Thats an excellent shot in my book. The sky complements the freeway lights very well!

    Are you a real MD?....I am thats why Im asking. Im a Adult Neurologist Specialist.
    Thanks a lot. No, not a real doctor. Whatever gave you that idea?

    The more I look at this image, the more I'm distracted by the trees. I'll have to get back there and find a different angle, longer lens, something. Thanks again for all the great comments and feedback.
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    Re: Harbor Freeway

    I like these types of shots. I've always wanted to take one like this. Good job!!

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