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    Happy Time Travel

    Again...from downtown Chinatown, Vancouver, BC. Liked the neon, and the human aspect. Was going to put it to black and white but didn't have the same *ooomph* without those neon lights.

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    Re: Happy Time Travel

    Jared - Totally agree - the red lights are a Plus here. I like this a lot but just not the sloping tan sidewalk in the foreground. I did a scroll crop and it seems to work a little better with them cropped out (just dont clip off their feet). Might also sharpen it up a tad. Excellant composition.

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    Re: Happy Time Travel

    Maybe you could try some selective coloring with those neons. I really don't know what else to say about this picture. To me it seems like its lacking something.

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    Re: Happy Time Travel

    GB,

    Good eye about the sidewalk. Looks a whole lot better with it cropped out. I'll try out the sharpness thing, though I'm not always impressed when I post process my pictures for sharpness (probably due to my lack of skill with post processing).

    Xsport,

    Thanks for the comments, I appreciate it. The selective coloring is a good idea; I'll have to try it out.

    Thanks.

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