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    Happy Birthday Joyce

    Nikon D40 with Sigma 18-200 mm Lens using flash
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    Re: Happy Birthday Joyce

    Hmm. This is an odd one, Don. Almost like a funny scene in a serious situation. (??) I guess it works from that perspective. Why so grainy if you used a flash? It's also a bit soft for a flash.

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    Re: Happy Birthday Joyce

    Joyce doesn't look all that happy in spite of the balloon. Who is she?
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    Re: Happy Birthday Joyce

    Because I know at least some of the story, I find this a very poignant photograph, Don!
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    Re: Happy Birthday Joyce

    Thanks Frog. Joyce is my wife. She's in a njrsing home. The flash was bounced on the ceiling.

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    Re: Happy Birthday Joyce

    Don - I like the colors, but I would really like to see this as a b&w.

    To say that this is a powerful image might be a cliche, but...boy, is it ever...

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    Re: Happy Birthday Joyce

    Thanks Dray.

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    Re: Happy Birthday Joyce

    I like the picture, but it's waaaay too grainy.

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    Re: Happy Birthday Joyce

    Very moving photo Don, thanks for sharing this very personal part of your life with us.

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    Re: Happy Birthday Joyce

    I also like it, How ever I would of like to seen your wife holding on to the balloon.

    I also would like to see this in a B&W version.

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    Re: Happy Birthday Joyce

    Thanks. I have always felt that photography ought to be about sharing life. Icicle: Sorry, my wife can't hold anything. She suffers from very severe arthritis.

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