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    Fluorite Toothpaste poker's Avatar
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    Happy

    This was taken during the L.A. Photogathering. Opinions are always appreciated.

    Happy the Star is a registered tradmark of Carls Jr...blah blah blah...
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    Re: Happy

    NICE, I like the bright color in contrast with the B & W image. The man looks like he's in prison.

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    Re: Happy

    I think it works. I wish the whole thing was in focus though. He looks a bit soft to me. But I still like the contrast of the sad, happy. The real and unreal.

    How can a sign be happier than a human being? lol.
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    Re: Happy

    Thanks for the comments you two.

    It might be a bit soft since this was a zoom and crop into the file. It may need some more USM.

    I think this is a downtown parking lot but it sure does look prison like.
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    Re: Happy

    Did you desaturate everything but the star then?
    This is a great slice of life photograph!
    I like the composition.
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    Re: Happy

    Quote Originally Posted by mtbbrian
    Did you desaturate everything but the star then?
    This is a great slice of life photograph!
    I like the composition.
    Brian
    Thanks Brian. Glad you like it. Yes, this was a selective desaturation.

    Thanks Tom (Overbeyond)!
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    Re: Happy

    It works for sure and it was very well seen. Looks perfect on my screen.
    Simple and effective.
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