hanna...

[Jonas Mancuso]

Here is an image from my latest senior session. Thoughts please

[drg]

An interesting design idea, but the kerning difference in the vertical versus horizontal numbers as a border is distracting to say the least. Having a projected drop shadow for her name doesn't fit stylistically with the the numbers either.

I'd love to see more of her face with the background washed out more and even slightly overlayed/feathered in to the edges of the photo. Unless her chin is terribly unattractive, more of it would enhance her chewing on her lip I feel.

This has quite a lot of potential but it seems to be too much and too little in a couple of critical place. If the numeric border was even rendered with a different background tone, it might make the rest of the image pop more.

Lots I do like please do not misunderstand, just a few glaring points. Any one of which may be the one which if modified could really make this standout.