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You know it is a good shot for the difficult lighting, over all the subject is great. This isn't something you see every day, thats for sure. A burst of flash might have helped if you were close enough. What kind of camera were you using? At what distance were you?
Thats too bad the shadow was right in here face on that first one.
If you ever have the chance again try getting the subject to glance at you.
There are still some shade/shadow issues, but this one works better, much better, as the shade almost looks like a veil and highlights her eyes quite well! Perhaps a bit less well focused or 'frozen', moving target I know, but still a good subject with this time some dynamic elements with her hand/arm coming up behind her neck.