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    Member alderse's Avatar
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    Gun & money

    Hi,

    Today i take this photo, what do you think about there ?

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    It not dollar, it's euro money

    Thank you,

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    Re: Gun & money

    I like the last one. I don't like the crop on the other two. I feel the first one would be better if the pistol was in focus and there was more space on the left.
    I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..

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    Re: Gun & money

    The first one is the best composition I think , but the gun needs to be overlapping the money or on top of it . Also the gun is too dark and looses a lot of detail.
    A couple of dark splots on the money might look cool too
    That looks like a expensive prop....
    Pete

    Isn't it a cool thing in nature that the colours never seem to clash...

    I have no issues with you editing my photos

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    Re: Gun & money

    I am completely lost as to the point of this photo. It lacks any visible purpose. Is it dirty money? Is it money that you are going to use to buy ammunition to go hunting? Are you a police officer? Give us more of a clue than just a bunch of 100's, and a handgun on your kitchen table.
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    Re: Gun & money

    The biggest problem I have is the gun: I hope I can see more of it,i.e., brighter with more details. I don't think it's about dirty money and as the bills look clean

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