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It is a really nice composition and you did a good job finding this but the light, background and sky are nothing special. You should try this in a variety of lights and weather conditions, I'm thinking a sunset with a ski boat in the water would make this great.
I too think your composition is great here. The lighting in the sky, background, and fg is very much the same making the image a bit "flat" You do have some dynamic looking clouds and I would think that you could bring this up a notch wth some editing in PS or whatever you use. Especially since you cannot get back there agin too soon, I would take what you have here and do the work to bring it up some.
good framing and comp
btw, I did a quick edit to your image and thought the result was pretty good. there is a good foundation here to bring this image to another level. If your interested, I could post the result.