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Thread: Gray LA day

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    Gray LA day

    Took this pic on a gray Los Angeles morning where my cousin lives. Blew it up to 16x20, put it in a frame and hung it on my wall at home. Let me know what you think.
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    Re: Gray LA day

    Welcome to the forum. I think it is a good subject from a good point of view, but i would have cropped out the car on the left so that it looks more of an empty street. I would not touch the bottom, but would crop off the top to bring it into the 16x20 ratio
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    Re: Gray LA day

    I like the format you presented this in.

    When I first glanced at your image I thought it was tilted to the left but looking closer I saw that it is the trees that are tilted. You did a great job capturing that tilt/leaning palm look.

    I would try lightening the image as I think grey days are best represented by a light pale washed out look and to me this image is too dark but I like it anyway.

    Good job!
    No, I DON'T need that.

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