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    Panarus biarmicus Moderator (Sports) SmartWombat's Avatar
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    in the gravel

    Rather than just the car parked in the gravel by the tyre wall, I tried to include the race going by.

    Yes I took only one, not burst mode spray & pray, but used both eyes and got the car just where I wanted it.

    So did you notice I chopped off the heads of the photographer extreme right and the front row of fans?
    I didn't while I shot it, I was concentrating on the cars and timing the shot.
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    Starting to think outside of the box icicle's Avatar
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    Re: in the gravel

    Looks Good.

    And to be honest I didn't even notice the fans and other photographer's until you mentioned them.
    At least he was able to walk away from it.
    Feel Free to edit my photos, However please explain what you did to them.

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    Re: in the gravel

    Maybe you should just crop some off of the top. Eliminating all of the people. Except for the drivers and the official of course. Great timing.
    I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..

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    Re: in the gravel

    Like this ?
    Emphasises the diagonals in the composition a bit more.
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    Re: in the gravel

    Yep, That's what I meant.
    I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..

    Sony a99/a7R

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    Re: in the gravel

    Oh Yeah - That crop looks fantastic! Very nice timing on the shot as well.

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