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    Gothic and Modern

    Perhaps marred by an overcast sky.
    My main concern is the crop.
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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    I like the framing and crop on this, Paul. Well spotted scene. The subjects stand out nicely and work off eachother. Other than the lack of any detail in the sky, this is good.
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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    Paul,
    I agree with Gary. Nice framing.
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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    As you note; that overcast blown out sky........

    I like the crop well enough and like the way there are only a few elements in the image but that drainpipe gives me problems because it isn't 100% vertical.

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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    Well being in Wurzburg for only one day and a sky not cooperating and not shooting in raw rather hampered things.
    Am I going OTT with this sky ?
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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    Great Paul. Now I would just increase the white in your levels adjustment. Now that the white blown out sky is gone, the levels can use a boost. Looking good.
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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    Paul,

    I find this enchanting and the recent edit makes it a lot better. My only nit pic is that it needs a slight counter clockwise rotation as the tower seems to be leaning just a tad.

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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    I find the clouds seem to be in the incorrect orientation. The clouds do add to the photo I just wish they had been rotated 90 degrees.
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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    Quote Originally Posted by readingr
    Paul,I find this enchanting and the recent edit makes it a lot better. My only nit pic is that it needs a slight counter clockwise rotation as the tower seems to be leaning just a tad.
    Interesting, I used the ruler rotation tool in Lightroom drawing from the centre of the louvres up to the centre of the ball under the statue.
    So I suspect it's an illusion, but if more people see it, then I have to move it a gnat's more.
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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    I like the edit better. Also, though I do like how you naturally framed it with the buildings on the sides, it also seems a tad obscured but somewhat unaesthetic surroundings. The building itself seems interesting, if somewhat weird (the Goths would try to slay me for that). -Gb
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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    Quote Originally Posted by gahspidy
    Now that the white blown out sky is gone, the levels can use a boost.
    Thanks for the step by step improvement suggestions.
    Is this what you had in mind?
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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    Great. Exactly what I had in mind. Well done from beginning to end. Now, if only I could look close enough to see if you filled in every last opening in the steeple with sky . . . .
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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    Pixel by pixel, it was hard work, and I'm sure I missed a few
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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    Quote Originally Posted by SmartWombat
    Pixel by pixel, it was hard work, and I'm sure I missed a few
    Yes, that is very intricate work and it looks from here like you spent the time and achieved the well deserved results.
    please do not edit and repost my photos


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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    Nice work Paul - makes it stand out.

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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    Quote Originally Posted by SmartWombat
    Pixel by pixel, it was hard work, and I'm sure I missed a few
    Your being modest
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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    Quote Originally Posted by GB1
    it also seems a tad obscured but somewhat unaesthetic surroundings.. -Gb
    Then I've achieved what I set out to capture.
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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    great shot i like the colors and i don't know if u guys were talking about this already and sorry if you did but i feel that the steeple is far to sharp
    well done tho

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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    Third version is excellent.

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    Re: Gothic and Modern

    Thanks, daq7

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