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    Seb
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    The good time is over...

    Comments are welcome.

    Seb
    Last edited by Seb; 04-08-2010 at 10:46 PM.

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    Jim B. jbaldocchi's Avatar
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    Re: The good time is over...

    Nice composition, I think the colors are a bit subdued. You might try using LAB to punch up the colors.

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    The photographer cowgirl in skate shoes euphoria's Avatar
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    Re: The good time is over...

    I think it looks very neat... Kind of like a poster affect. Is that because you editted it on a program or do you just have a really super nice camer?

    All that is gold does not glitter,
    Not all those who wander are lost;
    The old that is strong does not wither,
    Deep roots are not reached by the frost.
    From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
    A light from the shadows shall spring;
    Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
    The crownless again shall be king.


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    Re: The good time is over...

    Thanks guys.

    Jim: I boosted the color saturation a little. Here is the result.

    Euphoria: Well I work with a Nikon D70. I did reworked the shot. It essentially involved burning and contrast adjustment.

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    Last edited by Seb; 04-08-2010 at 10:46 PM.

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    Re: The good time is over...

    Seb,

    One would never think a dead crab on an aged pier would make for good photography, but you somehow manage to keep bringing great shots to us. Very nice. The subtle colors are very pleasing.

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    :yikes:

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    Re: The good time is over...

    i really like the shot although crabs do freak me out alittle, its always amazing to take somthing simple like a crab and turn it into a great photo

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    Re: The good time is over...

    I like it Seb. Even if I don't comment on all of your pictures, I honestly haven't seen one I didn't like.

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    Re: The good time is over...

    Thank guys. Your comments are much appreciated!

    Seb

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    Re: The good time is over...

    Wow. deffinitly a favorite. Your photos/style are very influencive

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    Re: The good time is over...

    I like the image with the colors subdued. It gives the weathered deck more character. The bluest plank on the right is out of focus (slightly distracting, to me) due to the fact that the deck and the film plane or not parallel. However adjusting the camera to correct for this would have changed the angle of the shadow on the crab cast by your flash.

    All in all it is a great shot. I've seen several of your post and I am envious of the subject matter you always post. Oh well, grass is greener problem.

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    Seb
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    Re: The good time is over...

    LoudPicture: Thanks for the good words!

    jdugger: Thanks a lot for commenting. The focus plane was more ore less deliberate. Actually, I would have shot this with a Lense Baby if I had one. I wanted some blur but I fully respect your opinion. On a side note, most of my recent shots were... shot during a workshop in late june. The place is far away from my home so yes, the grass is greener elsewhere! lol


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    mooo...wooh hoooh! schrackman's Avatar
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    Re: The good time is over...

    I think the subdued colors work really well for this photo. I actually like it quite a bit. At first I didn't realize the crab was dead...I got the impression it had just been caught and was awaiting its fate, but then I looked closer at the legs...yep, dead all right.

    Nice work, Seb.

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