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Seb, this is not bad. I do not feel good about the beam blocking the door at the back and you might have done so intentionally to block some of the bright light, but I think the bright lights shining in would have been acceptable.
I can't say without any doubt if the light coming from the door would have overpowered the picture as I don't have an alternate take for that one. However, my feeling (considering how various pictures from this series came out) is that the light would have been quite problematic. I guess that I should have managed to entierly hide the door behind the beam so the door itself doesn't act as a distraction from the scene as a whole.