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    Glass and Ice: Broken Bus shelter Window

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    Re: Glass and Ice: Broken Bus shelter Window

    These are very nice Don, well seen! The second one reminds me of a suiseki piece.
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    Re: Glass and Ice: Broken Bus shelter Window

    Both are quite creative angles, Don. Nice eye. I wish the technical execution was a bit better though - the top one seems a bit dark and grainy, and distorted (maybe that's on purpose?), whereas the bottom one is better but has a lot of jaggies around the edges of the glass - looks like JPEG compression artifacts. I like the black border area at the bottom, btw.

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    Re: Glass and Ice: Broken Bus shelter Window

    Thst second one has a lot of potential if you could get some interesting people in the background.

    Not bad just as it is either.
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    Re: Glass and Ice: Broken Bus shelter Window

    Thanks guys. The black line on the bottom is the frame of the window.

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