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There is a lot of good possibilities with this but,(the word that brings trepidation) I think it is just too cluttered.
The girl has a very photogenic face and I don't even mind the shadow patters but the over exposed top of hat, the whatever that appears to sit on her shoulder and the muddle of clothing/furniture/blanket ? just give us no reference to what this is about.
Not that it needs to be about something...just needs to give my eyes a clue.
The title gave me expectations that aren't met.
ps...I'd have taken the shot too and hoped for the best.