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Thread: Girl in Red

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    Girl in Red

    From the bus window using full 760 mm equ with wicon.
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    Re: Girl in Red

    Ok, not bad. But I would like to see more area around her feet.. seems like they're almost out of the scene, and there's just so much space above her head instead. But it does make her seem short, an interesting effect.........
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    Re: Girl in Red

    i would also like to see more space by her feet and less up top.
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    Re: Girl in Red

    Crop vertical from left almost up to her back and also on top and her feet won't seem too close to frame anymore.
    I like this one, Don.
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    Re: Girl in Red

    Quote Originally Posted by Frog
    Crop vertical from left almost up to her back and also on top and her feet won't seem too close to frame anymore.
    I like this one, Don.
    What a great thought.

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    Re: Girl in Red

    You got great lighting for this one.

    It seems odd that the fence gets taller behind her which it the opposit of what perspective tells us will happen.

    I too think you have a bit too much frame space above her and not quite enough below her but I don't think a crop from the left will improve this image as I think the long line of the fence adds a lot.
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    Re: Girl in Red

    Thanks guys.

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    Re: Girl in Red

    Quote Originally Posted by MB1
    You got great lighting for this one.

    It seems odd that the fence gets taller behind her which it the opposit of what perspective tells us will happen.

    I too think you have a bit too much frame space above her and not quite enough below her but I don't think a crop from the left will improve this image as I think the long line of the fence adds a lot.

    It's a longlens--therefore magnifies the morse distant objects more than nearer ones.

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