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    Girl in the Doorway and Man in the Street

    55-200 mm Nikkor from the bus window
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    Re: Girl in the Doorway and Man in the Street

    Like them both, Don. The girl maybe should have been a vertical and let a bit more room under her feet. You can crop up to the pole, I think.
    I like how the man seems to be heading into the painted scene in the second shot.
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    Re: Girl in the Doorway and Man in the Street

    I want you to crop that first image to remove everything left of the pole.

    I really like the background of the second image-take that bus again!
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Girl in the Doorway and Man in the Street

    Thanks guys. Ok Ok

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