thanks, both comments were very helpful. You are right, it's more a detail than a story... maybe I could have caputured both at the same time - so she'd have the detail of her hair that day as well as a bit of action as well.

This is definately the feedback I need... Thanks again!!

Any technical feedback? Is the lighting too harsh or distracting. I meant for some glow effect - got too much; yet ended up liking the effect. If I wanted to eliminate this harsh light, does anyone have a suggestion of how I could do that?

THANKS!