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Thread: Geometry

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    Senior Member payn817's Avatar
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    Geometry

    Detail shots from the new Harriet Tubman Museum in Macon, Ga. The museum has not yet opened due to budget issues. An additional 3 million is needed to furnish and finish the inside. Any ideas on how to improve this would be appreciated. The windows are boarded up, and such, so the entire building looks ugly, and would be of no interest.
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    Re: Geometry

    payn817, I like these, especially the first one. The angles, point of view, and framing look good to me. The only issue i have with framing is the second shot as it looks like the horizontal beam is cutting through the middle of the frame. Maybe cropping a bit off the sky and then an equal amount from each side to maintain aspect ratio would bring the beam up over center. Geometry it is. Very good
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    Re: Geometry

    I like the second one. The only nitpick I can possibly have is the sky. But that's me: if it's not oversaturated, then it doesn't register with me!
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    Re: Geometry

    Thanks for your comments. I am dissapointed with them, but the color is true, and everything seems alright. I thought I could make something out of this structure, but everytime I look at it, it just seems too boring, or just doesn't fit my vision.

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