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Are those colors correct? Were you shooting with an off camera flash or a ring light? The shadows and lighting are pretty harsh.
I'm thinking you should keep experimenting with this as the subject is pretty interesting.
I'd say these photos are a good first attempt and show potential but don't seem to be keepers to me.