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I had the same thought. I'm wondering how it would look if you skewed the colors more toward the blue side so that it looks more like the work was being done by moonlight?
I have a total lack of respect for anything connected with society, except that which makes the roads safer, the beer stronger, the food cheaper, and the old men and old women warmer in the winter and happier in the summer. Brendan Behan
Seb, I like what your doing with this concept of macabre humor. The only thing I find that should be improved here is the pitch fork position. Jenny had a cool idea of looking like it was tossed haplessly in a quick getaway, but moreso i think having it straight up blends in too much with the fence slats. If it were cutting across the slats diagonally, it would lend to more tension and also allow it to stand out more. Nice work here!
I have a total lack of respect for anything connected with society, except that which makes the roads safer, the beer stronger, the food cheaper, and the old men and old women warmer in the winter and happier in the summer. Brendan Behan
Yikes.. too weird with that arm lying there like that !!!!!
I think I would have left a little more space in the foreground. Maybe some (fake) blood on the pitchfork too, or something like a black cat.
GB
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My one critique would have been to have the fork closer as if it was a real accident and possibly pining the fingures to the ground, and then I change my mind because it looks to imperfect and like it as it is.
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