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    Garden Visitor

    One of my favorite subjects.

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    Re: Garden Visitor

    I like how the bord and wood patterns in the fence behind it somehow work together. Nice shot

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    Re: Garden Visitor

    Thanks very much. I was just sitting in the yard enjoying the afternoon and watching birds with my camera.

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    Re: Garden Visitor

    That knot right behind its head make it pop to me. I'm sure you deliberatly composed it just for that.
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    Re: Garden Visitor

    Frog-

    uh, uh, oh, yeah-absolutely! I meant to do that....

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    Re: Garden Visitor

    i must be the strange one, i'm not a fan of the background. i think all the lines are distracting, they take the eye away from the subject.
    still beautiful flowers and bird

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    Re: Garden Visitor

    Yes, I can see what you mean, but thanks for the compliment.

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    Re: Garden Visitor

    I think it's a winner CF. I know you were, to a degree, "lucky" in that this little fellow just came along and posed. But, even so, you have it pretty nailed I think. I especially like the fact that there are no branches of the shrub obscuring or behind his body.

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    Re: Garden Visitor

    A good capture CF. Looks like you have a great Hummer garden. The fence doesn't bother me but the harsh lighting is a draw back IMO. Bright sunshine means strong shadows. For future pics of little hummers in strong sunlight use your pop-up, on camera flash as a fill light to bring out details around the eyes and under their bellies.
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    Re: Garden Visitor

    This is great CF, you caught him at the perfect time with a great backgound. Nice image.
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    Re: Garden Visitor

    Didache, CLK, Greg:

    Thanks very much for the comments. Nice to get some feedback, I appreciate it very much.

    CLK- I will keep your ideas in mind for my next grand hummer adventure. In this instance, however, I was approx. 10 yards away so I don't know if my flash would have helped. This was really a dumb luck shot.

    Just the same, thanks for writing.

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    Re: Garden Visitor

    Impressive work CF.

    A very nice subject! "Lucky" is a term to describe this moment.
    Very beautiful setting.The wood is a nice color, the knot in the fence really pulls you in.
    I have read all the tips suggested, a fill flash really does work in certain situations.

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    Re: Garden Visitor

    very nice shot!...I held a envelope up and cropped about a half inch off the top and the bird seemed to pop a little more to me...of course I am of that .."everyone has a opinion " variety

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    Rick/jk:

    Thanks very much for the comments. I will keep the fill flash in mind. I didn't use it as I thought I was too far away. The crop is a great suggestion. I tried it also and agree, it makes a difference. Thanks again.

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    Re: Garden Visitor

    Nice capture CF !
    Hummers make great subjects, but yah gotta be quick.
    The fence background adds to the photo, especially the 'halo' knot ( imho ).
    Looks like you did everything right ! :thumbsup:
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    Re: Garden Visitor

    Rivman,

    I appreciate your comments. Thank you.

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    Re: Garden Visitor

    CF,

    I like nearly everything about this shot, but agree with CL about using fill in flash. Try dodging the bird a fraction to get a bit more detail.

    I love your fence

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    Re: Garden Visitor

    Roger,

    Thanks for the comments on this shot also. I will try the fill flash suggestions over the coming weekend when I park it in the back yard to enjoy the birds. Thanks again.

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    Re: Garden Visitor

    Not a bad little shot, I would like to see the bird bigger.

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    Re: Garden Visitor

    Tyson,

    Thanks for the comment. I was about 10 yards away so this was the biggest I could get the little guy. But, I know what you mean.

    Thanks again.

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