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    Gaby

    I am pretty much new to Photography. I have also enjoyed taking pictures but recently started to give it my best shot... here are a few I recently took of a family friends dauther. This is my first roll of E200. A friend recommended I use it.

    all comments are greatly appreciated.
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    Re: Gaby

    I like #2 best. You filled the frame well and I like that angle of pose best. I know nothing about film and not a lot about digital, but these colors seem washed out and your focus seems a bit soft to me. You did a great job blurring a busy background so as to become more of an asset to the photo.
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    Re: Gaby

    Thank you for the comment.
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    Re: Gaby

    great photos. some touch up possibly needed. it seems the exposure may be off...unless you're going for that late 70's early 80's film feel...but what do i know.

    i like how you captured the innocence. :thumbsup:

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    Re: Gaby

    I actually wasn't really going for that. I wanted a clean and sharp look. I don't have a way to edit them so I want to know what I did wrong so I can have something to think about next time I shoot my next roll.

    thanks for the comment.
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    Re: Gaby

    There is a PR forum dedicated to film. If you haven't posted there, perhaps you should ask there as well -- you might get better help from the film shooters.
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