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    Here is another image of the model Gabriela from my Jan ANIME photo shoot.

    I like this, but I think it asks for another background, hence may be a good candidate for some PP background work.

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    Re: Gab

    I can see why you like this, the colours are fantastic, the pose is a little awkward IMO (particularly the left arm) but I am not sure what you were trying to achieve exactly so perhaps it's warranted. The shadows against the wall are a little off putting but am sure they could be addressed simply enough. Good stuff.

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    Re: Gab

    GB, she's a pretty model and that smile is great and I can see why your attached to this one, but the pose really looks awkward and forced and the shadow on the back wall is a deal breaker.
    Just my thoughts.
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    Re: Gab

    I think I can edit that back shadow out. You think it's forced? Interesting .. I think there's a fine line between that and a normal posed shot. Yes, this model was great to work with. I think this one may work well with another background, which I will try.

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