Fresh

[Gabe C.]

it's been a while since my last post, but i went to take photos with a good friend of mine a few weeks ago and here they are...let me know what you think.

[Herriot]

A lot to comment on here Gabe! IMO the two that grab my attention are in the middle of the series, the shadow against the spray painting and the image of the road and ferris wheel at night.

The shadow is really striking, obviously the sun was high in the sky and you capitalised on that which led to a really strking result of a very ordinary subject, excellent!

The night shot also has some really warm colours and I think that you have exposed it well, the obvious problem is that the image is blocked by the railing somewhat. Saying that, I do like the fact that the railing meets the trail lights of the distant traffic at an almost perpendicular angle, if I was you I would try cropping from the bottom to remove the lower rail completely.

Interesting shots and keep them coming!

Herriot

[Gabe C.]

any more feedback?

[PlantedTao]

You posted an awful lot to comment on
So, I'll just comment on the photos I like the most. I think the self portrait (shadow) on the graf is a good shot. I like the choice of background and the angle, it prpduces just enough tension to make it interesting. A nice dark shadow as well on a good background.
The other I like is the flowers and graf. It is a good urban photo. However it needs to have better dof. The flower in the front should be sharper and more graf is needed to provide a more dramatic photo. It is a good idea, but I think the execution could be worked on to make it a much better photo.