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this is an interesting shot. i like how you got the front bird mid step, so you really get the feeling of one following the other, not just standing next to each other.
I like the shallow dof, the colors are warm and pleasing, and the positions of the birds as well as your framing is working. Also the focus is sharp on the eye of the leading bird, so well done
A cute shot. The position of the head of the first bird looks like it is really telling the second one to follow it. Timing is good, too, or it's just like they're simply standing there. DOF could be more though.
Second thought lovely picture. You got the first bird just right as he walks along and the second is spot on for DOF and the colours are wonderful.
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I wish the focus on the first bird was just a little crisper. The eye seems in focus but the outline and the feathers are a little soft. It is a very nice composition though.
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