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Of the two I guess the second is better mostly because of the composition. Both suffer from bad lighting and that the focus point seems to be somewhat behind the eyes.
FWIW I find macro photography to be quite difficult and I get far fewer "keepers" and far more "almosts" per shot than I do with any other type of photography.