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Thread: flowers....

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    flowers....

    hello everyone,















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    olivier

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    Re: flowers....

    These are absolutely beautiful Olivier! The compositions are perfect in my opinion.

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    Re: flowers....

    I really like these pictures. I like the depth of field and the color in the first two especially. The third is pretty good, but it almost feels more like black and white since it doesn't have the color of the first two.

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    Re: flowers....

    Very nice pics. I would like to have seen a bit more dof in the first and second, and maybe a tighter crop in the second. Also may help to remove the tiny black specs on the flower, especially in the second.
    good shooting
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    gary


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    Re: flowers....

    thank you so much for your comments Copy_Kot,PrevailingConditions, gahspidy

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    gahspidy
    Also may help to remove the tiny black specs on the flower, especially in the second

    I will do it later

    bye

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    Re: flowers....

    Olivier, the composition looks good, but DOF seems to be too shallow with the flower in your second post. I think the image would have looked nicer if more of the flower petals were in focus, and with the stem fading out of focus (since the image is not a close-up or macro).

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