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    Flower is a Vase

    This was with f/1.8 50mm on an Oly - makes it 100mm equivalent ...I liked the vignette effect I got this, making the vase disappear (sort of)
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    Re: Flower is a Vase

    I love the black bg in this, it really makes those flowers jump out at you. To me, the yellow tones are too heavy and I would like to compare seeing all the vase as opposed to just some of it. I really like the comp, framing, subject. Oh and that back right flower looks like it has a watermark or something, kinda bugging me. Otherwise a lovely subject and photo!
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    Re: Flower is a Vase

    I get why you have the watermark, but it does make it a bit difficult to be able to critique the image when it's placed like that. I definitely dig the vignetting and the dof, but I think I'd like just a bit more for the primary flowers.
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