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    Florida Park

    Ok im in week 2 of my new found hobby. Got new lenses and lights comming, but for now how is this?
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    Re: Florida Park

    Hey Curtis,
    glad you found photography. . .and us. This looks to be an appealing subject. you have composed this very nicely with the long stalks in the fg, focus on them, and all the bg falling into place. the image is a little dark, especially about the edges (vignetting) but the important elements here are lit and exposed well.
    you can post a ;larger image next time, up to 640 at it's longest side so it can be more easily appreciated.
    Welcome and looking forward to more. . . .with the new gear as well.
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    Re: Florida Park

    Well, you do have an eye for composition and your exposure looks pretty good if perhaps a little dark.

    I don't know if it would improve the image but I would like to see it rotated to the left a bit so the bottom of the building is level.

    BTW post more!
    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: Florida Park

    I'd like to see the color version if you shot it in color.
    Have to disagree with Mb about the rotate as then the reeds would be crooked.
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    Re: Florida Park

    Color one. Just got my Eye1 Spectro so can finaly adjust my screen
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