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    Floofie

    From an early evening model shoot on July 3rd. C&Cs welcome.

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    Re: Floofie

    Excellent quality image but can be a little brighter. The shoe made it imperfect for me. I find two wrong things with the shoe, the heel is poking a hole in her thigh, and her foot is not nesting comfortably in the shoe. Two issues with the shoe that made me wish she was barefooted.
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    Re: Floofie

    Thanks for the feedback Geraldb. I didn't even notice that heel poking her. It doesn't seem to be bothering her that much, but she was an experienced model and could probably hold a pose through an earthquake Brightening it up a tad will be easy, and I may be able to remove that shadow where the heel touches her leg to reduce the look of pressure there.

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    Re: Floofie

    Great lighting and sharpness. The shadows add depth and intrigue. And the heel doesn't bother me. I do see what gerald is saying about the shoe not fitting snugly on her foot. That would be my only nitpick, but I'm not sure how big a deal it is.

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    Re: Floofie

    Thanks Dray. With posed shots I think the bar is higher, and every little detail should be right. Using that strict measure, this shot is probably a no higher than 5 or a 6 out of 10, but it's still nice on the eyes eh?

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    Re: Floofie

    Greg, I would just make this a bit brighter

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