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From an early evening model shoot on July 3rd. C&Cs welcome.
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Excellent quality image but can be a little brighter. The shoe made it imperfect for me. I find two wrong things with the shoe, the heel is poking a hole in her thigh, and her foot is not nesting comfortably in the shoe. Two issues with the shoe that made me wish she was barefooted.
Thanks for the feedback Geraldb. I didn't even notice that heel poking her. It doesn't seem to be bothering her that much, but she was an experienced model and could probably hold a pose through an earthquake Brightening it up a tad will be easy, and I may be able to remove that shadow where the heel touches her leg to reduce the look of pressure there.
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Great lighting and sharpness. The shadows add depth and intrigue. And the heel doesn't bother me. I do see what gerald is saying about the shoe not fitting snugly on her foot. That would be my only nitpick, but I'm not sure how big a deal it is.
Thanks Dray. With posed shots I think the bar is higher, and every little detail should be right. Using that strict measure, this shot is probably a no higher than 5 or a 6 out of 10, but it's still nice on the eyes eh?
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