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    fist bump

    Just was searching through some photos and came across this one. Thinking about getting it printed.
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    Re: fist bump

    32 views and CC'S yet. Come in, tell me it sucks and you don't like it, or tell.me to crib the bricks out of the bottom, which I just noticed. Anything.....
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    Re: fist bump

    I think that this could use more shadow and then highlights to suit. You might also crop out the concrete blocks at the bottom. I use Picassa 3 for my PP work as it has these functions and much more. It's also free.

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    Re: fist bump

    I do like it, actually. But I agree that something needs to be done to bring him out. Darkening the bg would help. Or maybe even a vignette?

    Also agree that the bricks need to go.

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    Re: fist bump

    Yep bricks need to go and you need to pop the colors with some saturation or something. But I do like it.

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