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    Fishing

    It has been a long time since I have developed any film. I took this on a recent bike ride. Trying to make it look vintage without processing it I used a 1950's Summicron 50mm lens and Kodak TriX 400. I cleaned off some dust spots and leveled the horizon, other than that it is out of camera. What do you think?

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    Re: Fishing

    Nice and balanced composition, Greg. What i like most of all is the grain. Film, especially high iso is great for texture.
    This is looking good, Greg.
    My one nitpik would be to have got down a bit lower so the ladies fishing rod was just over the trees.
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    Re: Fishing

    A very peaceful and calming image Greg and the position of the two people is great. Gary mentioned the rod position; I'm wondering if there is a possibility of the tip of the rod being lost against the white sky had you positioned it above the trees.
    The grain in the sky RH side looks a bit strong.
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    Re: Fishing

    Thanks Gary, Thanks Tom. I agree about the pole.
    I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..

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    Re: Fishing

    Ye gods! Tri X! excellent.I always liked HP4 myslf. Nice image, takes ya right back.

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    Re: Fishing

    Greg,

    I admire the photographer that can visualize their work in b/w. I have a very hard time with it but you seem to handle it well. There is something special about the texture of b/w and you have it here. Nicely done.

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    Re: Fishing

    Thanks Dave, Thanks David for the nice comments.
    I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..

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    Re: Fishing

    Hmmm .. one of those lazy day, human interest shots here. Not an artistic endeavor for sure, but this one makes you think. I guess it's about family rather than fishing (IMHO). The plainness of the surroundings sorta drives me crazy, but again it's not about that. I think the black and white is an excellent choice in shots like this.

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    Re: Fishing

    I agree with GB1 b&w is perfect for a shot like this. good job!
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    Re: Fishing

    Thanks GB. Thanks Marco
    I am like Barney Fife, I have a gun but Andy makes me keep the bullet in my pocket..

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