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This hard for me to critique as I don't really know what it is. It looks like it might be fireworks or something but I am unsure. BTW Max size in the forums is 800x800.
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i also don't know exactly what this is. i agree that it looks like fireworks though.
it looks interesting, but it seems very noisy. it think it works great as an abstract picture though.
as far as the gold ball shot goes; it looks to me like it needs some more colour saturation and is a bit overexposed, mostly just the golf balls though.
Looks like the bottom of a glass with lights from a disco ball.
The effect is kind of cool but the composition isn't doing it for me.
Wish I could point out why for you but I'm drawing a blank.
This looks like you could have been hand-holding a shot of fireworks with a slow shutter speed. There is a lot of noise in this image but that is not necessarily a killer. The entire right side of this long frame is empty which does not work well in this scene. I think cropping down to include all the lights in the frame with little empty space would improve and also bump up the contrast and black level to rid the noise and just allow the lights to stand out from a black background.
Your image size here is ok. Its just that if you load a photo directly through this website it only will allow 800 on the longest side, but you can certainly upload larger than that, as you did by hosting the image somewhere else. PhotographyReview has its own user gallery here as well that you can also use to host large images. Remember though that not everyone uses a large monitor and if you go too large where we have to scroll to see the photo, that will take away a lot from the viewing