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Thread: First out.

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    First out.

    Sunrise on the Potomac.
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    No, I DON'T need that.

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    Re: First out.

    Great DOF awesome reflection on the water. The only thing I don't care for is the cut off ground in the foreground. I would personally crop to just water. Is it just me or does the bridge (horizon) look tilted?

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    Re: First out.

    if you end up having trouble getting multiple things horizontal/vertical as needed, try a perspective crop

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    Re: First out.

    I know it wasn't the intent of the shot, but I would like to see one with you just a little further to the right (don't get wet, though) to miss that roof and then have the entire shot be the oval of the space under the left span and it's reflection. - TF
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    Re: First out.

    I love it other than the lean. Skew it or level it.
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    Re: First out.

    MB, I was enjoying this one so much until i saw the top right :yikes: and I almost passed out.

    Beautiful hues and colour tones here. Almost like a study on colour tempreture!! amazing from the deep warm reds to the cool blue greens and very nice transitions.

    Ok, so yeah, the top right gotta get fixed. I'm thinking of the bottom right as well, and i'm not sure if that works or not. I think it could use a try of cloning that out.

    well done.
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