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    Starting to think outside of the box icicle's Avatar
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    First attempt at wedding pictures.

    I done B&W before but never of a person, so let me know how this one works out.
    and I didn't plan to shoot these or I would of posed her differently, The bride and groom had a friend with a point and shoot taking pictures, and I ask if I could take some.
    So be a little harsh on this one please.

    And after looking at this one I think it should of had a little less foreground, but thats just me.


    Thanks for looking

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    May the force be with you Canuck935's Avatar
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    Re: First attempt at wedding pictures.

    I would prefer a tighter crop. I also wish there was some fill light on her face. She kinda has a racoon eyes thing going on..

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    Starting to think outside of the box icicle's Avatar
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    Re: First attempt at wedding pictures.

    Yes now I see what you mean about the racoon eyes.
    Like I said before, This was unplaned and spur of the moment shot. Didn't even have my hot shoe flash with me. and total forgot that I have a pop up flash on my camera.

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    Re: First attempt at wedding pictures.

    I would crop from the top and the bottom of this one, but I really think you need to get in closer or zoom in closer to highlight her facial expressions. The structure holds my attention more than the bride does.

    Chris

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    Re: First attempt at wedding pictures.

    Looks good, but needs better lighting, and a tighter crop.

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