First attempt at architecture

[icicle]

How does this work out.

Thanks for looking.

[shootforthesky]

This is good.

[Frog]

I think it works pretty well.
Took a sec for me to figure out if I was looking up or if I was looking down.
I wish the stairs came into play more prominently but I don't know how you'd do that with all those verticals

[jordanjez193]

The thing in the bottom right should be cropped (imo). Interesting picture though.

Fell free to critique by commenting on any of my flickr photos.

[icicle]

I think it works pretty well.
Took a sec for me to figure out if I was looking up or if I was looking down.
I wish the stairs came into play more prominently but I don't know how you'd do that with all those verticals

Opps me bad.

I was looking down to the bottom when I shot this, Sorry.

[jetrim]

This works pretty well, strong lines, nice balance of light and dark, but I agree with jordanjez193. I see no problem with centering the base by cropping 25% off the right and enough off the top to maintain the 4/3 aspect ratio it would remove a lot of the extraneous distractions from outside the structure and still leave a very strong visual impact.

[icicle]

Hows this.