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    Firefighter Tyson L. Sparks's Avatar
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    On the fire line.

    He is a chief at work, just a training burn but his job is still important. What do you think of my shot.



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    Re: On the fire line.

    Again the composition is good. I can't add anything to this one either. Nice focus, colors and the dof is good. Well done Tyson.
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    Re: On the fire line.

    Nice work, great composition, great emotion in the shot.

    The angle works well, the background is excellent.
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    Re: On the fire line.

    Tyson,
    I'd like to see it a little lighter. Other than that, I agree with Mr. Yuck and Greg.

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    Re: On the fire line.

    I agree it is an excellent shot--one they could print, frame, and hang in the fire training HQ, or where ever. The only slight drawback is, perhaps, too little contrast between the trainer's brown uniform and the subdued background. The blue shirt of the trainee (I assume) really helps frame her in the picture, and maybe something could be done to make him stand out similarly. Still very good as is...
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