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Thread: Fire!

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    Fire!

    From a shoot this afternoon on Dania beach. Dunno how, but I managed to clip the feet - deal breaker?
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    Re: Fire!

    Reallly like the atmosphere in this shot. I like how you captured the BG also. The fire is also captured well, even if it's a bit hot. it's fine. only tiny nitpic, i wish it was a wider shot to maybe get the edges of the fire and where it breaks off. that always looks nice. but overall a great image.
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    Re: Fire!

    Nicely done, Jim. I agree with Libans view on this. I think if you do not have anymore frame to this you might try a tighter crop, from bottom, top and left.

    Excellent sharpness and love the atmoshere you captured with the exposure.
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    Re: Fire!

    Excellent Jet! I'd like his face a little sharper / in focus, but overall it looks really good to me. He's also a tad centered I think, but this is OK. Nice work.

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    Re: Fire!

    I think it would look a little better if the body was more in focus instead of having the sort of glow/blur to it.
    but i like how the fires color almost jumps out of the picture.

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    Re: Fire!

    the fire is cut to short, I have the sense that it was only getting bigger and want to see that
    nice work on the background
    as for the missing feet recrop at the shins
    a wider frame showing more fire would be nice.

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    Re: Fire!

    I agre with Neous, it will be much better if the fire shown more...

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    Re: Fire!

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    Re: Fire!

    Good Idea. I am with the others on this. More flame. Other than that ... Seems to be rather expressive...Well Done.

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