Fields 3

[yairh20]

Shooting some fields near Beit-Shemesh. I just drove out with my sister's boyfriend, and when I saw something I wanted to photographed I asked him to stop.



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[GB1]

Hmm.

I sort of like the creative endeavor here. It's soft, but intentionally. Nothing grabs my attention to any one spot, but it's surreal in the way the colors play out. I still find myself wanting to see at least one spot in the image in focus, though .. perhaps the pole. The colors of the sky is sort of like a volcano erupting. There's a dot in the sky at the left 1/3rd point that needs to go.

I think the other field shots are OK too, super saturated for sure, but OK. The Field 1 shot is a bit too split down the middle for me in that you don't know if you're to look on the path or on the other side, but... That is sort of the theme in this one too - no particular spot to look, so perhaps that's the pt

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[shootme]

Again a nice artistic approach. I'd have tried to get closer to the ground and shoot through or along with the grass, but this might not have been possible? Good work, S