field trip

[Gabe C.]

Some shots

[CLKunst]

Hi Gabe,

Your field trip looks interesting. I too like to take field trips. Of the images you have here I think #2 is very strong and #3 could be with some work. I really like the abandoned building and barbed wire fence perspective. It looks like you had to be right up against that fence to get it all in. Good job!
I really liked #3 until I scrolled all the way down. The air conditioning unit leaves me cold. I think a crop just above it would make this a much more interesting image. The man sitting on the wall is the best part of this one and I like the fact that he is compositionally up high and in the top corner of the image. Give the crop a try and see what you think.

Regards,

[Herriot]

Hi Gabe,

Following on from the comments above, can you explain the figure rising above all of the others in the first shot? That confuses me..!!

Thanks
Herriot