field with snow at dusk

[engineer]

does this one make any sense to you?
thanks.

[spiraleyes]

I like the composition, it just seems a bit underexposed. Less haze in the horizon would help the eye focus on the picture a bit more as well. Good shot!

[jgredline]

I agree it looks underexposed, but I also would crop out half the sky if not more and also a little off the bottom. I would also sharpen up the bottom a little.

[freygr]

I have to agree it's too dark. Unless you just darkened it you my not have sufficient detail to lighten it up. I also agree that it does need to be cropped.

[gahspidy]

I like the subject. i agree a crop from the sky will help as the scene is nearly split into two with the horizon in the middle. Also, brightening this up some could improve. I notice there are some line patterns in the sky area. . sort of like a fingerprint on a negative or something. Wondering if you notice it and know what its from.

[engineer]

Hi Gary,
I can't see any lines in the sky, unless you mean the clouds just above the horizon. I took the photo with my Ricoh GR Digital, so its not fingerprints

Thanks for your comments guys. It was very dark when I took the photo, the exposure time is 1 second. I tried to catch the vibe of the moment, that's why I did let it that dark.

[gahspidy]

I am not seeing it now, must have been something on my end here.

[Don Schaeffer]

You need to increase alpha and contrast. The trouble for me is it's too balanced. Either crop the sky and leave 2/3 ground or vice versa. Either would work (each with its own meaning).