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I'm no flash expert, but the light/dark contrast and reflectivity of the sequins messes up the exposure a little bit. My monitor is bad which may be some of it. Anyway, here are some PS edits to consider.
Wow - I'm checking this now (later) on my MacBook and it looks totally different. You original looks better than my edit......
Lava - Thanks for the edit. On my monitor here at home it looks great. But my home monitor may be a tad bright. Yes, it was on-camera flash and I have rarely seen anything done with them that's worth bragging about ... it was kind of disorganized (they had studio lights but didn't have them set up, then didn't have extension cords, etc, etc..).
Thks too Daq
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Lighting is good, colors are vibrant, model is beautiful. Her expression is best in #3, and I like her pose best there, one reason because it blocks the prop which I'm not crazy about because I don't like the muted colors and the pattern of it against the clean colors and pattern of her outfit. The colors of her hair, makeup and accessories go with the outfit, but the total package doesn't click for me with the prop. My 2 cents.
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