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    feflections ~ with the new cokin

    greg took your advice splashed out on a couple of filters.

    took this around the corner from the house.

    not a lot of great vantage points but:

    not spectacular but going on an exercise this weekend (two if i am lucky) i think it helped the sky for sure.

    gradual neutral grey fyi
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    Re: feflections ~ with the new cokin

    Nice work 3L, and the GND filter seems to have done a wonderful job in making everything evened out. I really like how the sky and buildings come together. The photo composition and the geometry of the building(s?) are great. The only thing I find a bit distracting is the way the sprinklers break up the geometry, but others may feel that this is a good thing.

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    Re: feflections ~ with the new cokin

    My I ask which filter you used, as a graduated ND filter doesn't lend it self to this type of landscape.
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    Re: feflections ~ with the new cokin

    graduated neutral grey..

    just an exercise as my tendency is to get blown out skies,.

    skies: they tend to be too blue and no clouds until late after noon when i am working so i can't do anything there..

    think it might have toned down the blue,. should have done a before and after i guess but still learning

    composition is my first goal. the rest will have to come later.thanks again for input.

    i liked the way the composition came out...

    the building is on (the back of it) a purpose built "lake" and a "fountain" so one can't exclude it and again moving back doesn't help much unless you want to risk being run over !!

    gb ~ thanks ~ one building which i found looked good form the back side. i thought the lines worked. i read something about lines/reflections etc. and tried to make something work,

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    Re: feflections ~ with the new cokin

    Nothing to add except a slight crop from the top...

    There is this little annoying thing between the top roof and the sky (it's white)... or maybe just clone it out!

    Otherwise, and although i have mixed feelings regarding the fountain... this is a very nice shot!

    Nice job,

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